Long Dark Nights IP

By prettyrose

Fri, 24 Jan 2014
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12 comments
 

Those long dark nights

Give me such a fright

And a shiver down

My spine.

 

Being on my own doesn't

Help,and all of this makes

Me feel blue from about Two

In the afternoon,as the

Darkness slowly starts to loom.

 

Dreading the hours to

Come,even the radio

Or TV cant help me with

This one.

 

But when I look online

To read colorful stories

Of all kind.

 

I get a change of mind

And feel happy and

Warm inside.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Inspirational stories/poems/verses/speeches :)
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by Bee on

A sweet poem that ends on a bright note. 
 
Enjoyed.

Bee

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Bee, I hope your well.

 

 

Thank you so much for your positive comments and taking the time to read them, I do appreciate it.

 

 

take care
 

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Yes, I guess it's that reminder of other people around out there, isn't it? 2 o'clock can seem such a long time til morning if you're awake, I hope a good read helps you get sleepy aswell. This is a concise little cameo picture. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Rhiannonw, I hope your well. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment twice lol, I appreciate it.

 

ps Note to myself, don't rush 2 get a poem up when deadline is hours away and in pain!!!!

Thanks for the nudge in the direction Rhiannonw, I thought I had but obviously not lol.

 

 

 

take care

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

PS It is suggested to put an IP contribution under the 'Inspiration Point' genre. It just means ticking that box aswell as other like 'Love' or 'Miscellaneous', 'Nature' etc! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyIv added some more lines Bee and Rhiannonw, I hope your like :)

 

take care

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Oh, I see now, I'd been thinking you meant awake at 2 am, but yes, the foretaste of a long night to come does seem to start so early in the afternoon these dark days and nights! Glad you enjoy your online reading, and the company and absorption it gives, and I hope the pain is a bit less now. regards, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Rhiannonw, It was me not making it clear and I am glad it was drawn to my attention thanks again.

 

I know what you mean, I am so glad its almost end of Jan, the nights will soon be bright again :))))

 

Thank again for your comments :)))

 

 

take care

 

Trish x

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by VeraClark on

So tired of the dark nights PrettyRose. Well-captured. Like the bolt of hope in the ending, you tend to do that alot and it comes full circle.

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

smiley Hi Vera, Thank you so much for your lovely comments and taking the time to read my work, I appreciate it

 

And I try to always turn a negative around 2 a positive in my writing,work and life if possible, and you noticing that as meant so so much to me. thank you :))))

 

 

take care

 

Trish x

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on

An engaging poem, with a good lilt to it. A poem that would do well being read aloud.  Nice one Prettyrose, with a good hopeful ending.

Linda

Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Linda, I hope your well.

 

Thank you so much for your comments, It really made me smile&I appreciate you commenting about it being read outloud, I would feel honored if any of my work were to be read aloud, but I would not being doing that, as I hate my own voice lol, even though I was going to put a voice recording on here, of a poem I did but haven't been brave so far lol.

 

Thank you again your comments have really cheered me up :)

 

take care

 

Trish x

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx