Metamorphic

Cherry

By queen beatle

Tue, 04 Mar 2025
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It's a strong rock

setting on me now

wide and smooth

and simple.

 

Small puckers

where limpets lived;

shallow dimples

salt crystals.

 

If I were stronger—

but the weight

how it stays and

how it stills

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I like this poem describing the rocks pressure to its environment. Very astute.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Like pebbles in the sea, you bring memories of childhood, 

Colourful little rockfish, tiny crabs now and then a small octopus. Some sea grass. Shells and bright pebbles in the clear water, foam and sunny skies.

Armed with a little net on wire. How fortunate we were, those happy days of dreams and fantasy, of throwing pebbles into the sea.

See you Morwenna! Tom