The Phone Call
By Roberee
Fri, 07 Jun 2013
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Ring, Ring, Ring.
“Hello”
“Hi, is this Tina?”
“Yes, how are you, Honey?”
“Good, I saw you ad on backpage.com, so I wanted to call you”
“Do you want a date, sweety?”
“Um, yeah, how much?”
“Well, baby, you want to do incall or outcall?”
“In, if that’s okay?”
“That’s fine. Its 100 for half an hour and 150 for a full hour. One pop only, an extra 50 for two pops. So you wanna come over?”
“Yeah, would seven o’clock be ok?”
“Let’s make it 7:30 babe, I want to be ready for you. Call me before you get here.”
“Um, okay so 7:30. I’ll see you then?”
“Yeah, baby see ya. Bye.”
“….Bye”
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An odd ending. Is there more
Permalink Submitted by The Walrus on
An odd ending. Is there more to come?
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Good idea. I think it would
Good idea. I think it would work better if this was "part" of a much longer piece. Maybe start with the guy, he's having a bad day. maybe give the reasons why he wants to make the call in the first place. Welcome to the site!
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