Lone II

By samhennig
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The small movement of your chest,
each breath, the only sign.
Walls dull, no fresh paint, messed
up the finish round the corners, off-line,
Rain beats against the roof,
it's constant pattern becoming
silence. You stare out, no truth
to be found, you bring
Your gaze to the matte grey sky,
unchanged. No cloud passing by
Tea cold, an oily layer forming, try
to think of something that might fill the time.
it might be minutes,
it might be hours,
it might be days,
a haze of endless, empty spaces,
no voices other than the evening news,
no faces
no sharing of your morning views,
or musings with anyone but the plants
you no longer really water.
From this trance,
the ringing of a phone,
that cuts through the still
a loud and jolly tone,
his face lights, fill
these moments with the chance
to make a change.
‘You fancy catching up?’
A short exchange,
he answers ‘yes’.
A difference made.
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Comments
I like the hope towards the
I like the hope towards the end of this version Sam
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Yes, having appluded the
Yes, having appluded the first version, this one is diferent; and with respect I prefer the first, but that is just a matter of taste - still damn good poems! Sam.
Dougie Moody
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