the thorn and the rose

By seannelson

Tue, 01 Feb 2011

5 comments

everything goes
everything goes

the thorn and the rose
everything goes

the beat and the ryhme
it all goes in time

the summer beach
and the lake that froze :
everything goes
everything goes

the dawn and the dusk
the shine and the rust
the broom and the dust
the corn and the husk

the sun and the snow
the song and the show

everything goes
everything goes

Permalink Submitted by insertponceyfre... on Tue, 2011-02-01 21:36

wonderful flow - it's like a hypnotic chant

Permalink Submitted by seashore on Wed, 2011-02-02 08:21

I agree with insert.

Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on Wed, 2011-02-02 15:13

news seannelson Yes, I agree with insertponceyfre. Make a good song.Congrats; Cherry! repeat flow like a chorus. julie

Permalink Submitted by Highhat on Wed, 2011-02-02 16:21

Quite beautiful Sean ;)Pia

Permalink Submitted by seannelson on Thu, 2011-02-03 20:38

Well, thank all of you. Nice of you to take note of my little poem. friendliest regards, Sean

"If I send you post-cards from the side of the road: photographs of movies, and hearts about to implode" - Elliott Smith