Summer Day

By swindonwoody

Thu, 02 Jun 2011
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4 comments
 

oh summer day
lovley day
dont ever
go away
let me
just lay
here
in your
warm
sun shine

summer day
what do you say
can me and you
play
i dont
want you
to ever go away

let me lay
in a peacful
dream
just
you and me
under this tree

oh summer day
cant you stay
tell
the night
to go away
tell the moon
to go
oh hoilday
i just
want
you today
oh summer
day
thank you
for
making me me
happy today

Certificate U
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by oldpesky on
A lovely little ditty for summer. Only a couple of typos today, and I think they're worth fixing as this poem deserves it. 'peacful' - peaceful oh hoilday - on holiday Well done.

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hello swindonwoody, what a beautiful poem, especially for a day like today, when the sun is shining and the birds are singing. Love this poem very much. Thanks for the read. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
I think it is a lovely ode to a summer day. I hope the day stays with you for a very long time. ;)Pia

Submitted by swindonwoody on
thankyou all for your kind comment yes typos yes i see them now. thank you all . maggie

maggie