Post modern satori

By valiswaverider

Mon, 30 Apr 2012
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The sun defused on glass
The ripples around a whirlpool

The static on the TV screen
The senses switching on and off

DNA and RNA recoiling
Alpha state and awake

Birth and death
kensho

Certificate U
Poem
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Submitted by Sooz006 on
I'm not familiar with the format of Satori. I'm guessing it's one of those strict disciplines that is clinical and demands that every word is thought about and every syllable counts. I like it and appreciate the switching on and off of birth and death. If this was art it would be a blood red rose, in a brilliant white vase, in a brilliant white room. Nice writing.