are the birdsong that brings peace to the morning.

By well-wisher

Thu, 13 Jan 2011
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are the everemerald shining through the snow.
are the sun that must and shall forever rise.
are the faith and foundation my heart clings to.
are torn from this heavy, enormous space between my arms.
are the shelter for the nakedness in me.
are the leaving of emptiness, the fading of gloom.
are my niverse, my mour, my manity.

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Submitted by Highhat on
This is a bit more profound than a Valentine's card. Very good. Like it a lot Well-wisher. ;)Pia

Submitted by well-wisher on
Thanks, Pia. I'm happy that you see merit in it. I was worried that people might find it a bit gimmicky but I like the interactive element of the reader filling the blanks and thus becoming a part of the poem; uniting with the poem the way that love is a union.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

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