"CAVALCADERL" and "BEEME" EDIT

By Beeme

Tue, 11 Aug 2009
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Beeme could be a Sun-beam
or maybe a smiley face
or just a friend who writes good Poetry

Cavalcaderl could be a star
or maybe even the sunshine
or just a friend who writes good poetry

sweet sixteen is very young
the world's before you ee-by=gum
such talent of poems and stories

beyond my years and experience
of short stories and poems with
meanings and happy tales to share
and raise a smile

when a cherry is picked she will
be in her glory!

when a cherry is picked you will
reveal it proudly!

you paint your Abctales
of red white and blue
rosey ones sad ones
happy and mystery too

you paint your Abctales
with laughter and sadness
with friendship and love
and a hint of mystery too

I wonder if your hair is blonde
dark or redhead?
and if paint your nails with
the stars on and also pictures
of the moon?

I wonder what coulour your hair
is, red , brown , blonde or dyed
another colour?
and whether you paint your nails
with bright colours, with patterns
or not at all?

Certificate U
Poem
Opinion

Comments

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Beeme LOVELY YOUR THE TOPS !Pray this blow them out the sky! READINGS going UP UP yoo hoo. wow you have been busy this a great! is it a duet! may make top of the hits! well it's good! and great and clever No it's not dyed now I was mousey ugh! and a beauty so told once I laughed!Grey now? loved red . good luck exams play soft music first and realax. cut it downn.ok good luck exams1 what are you taking.

Submitted by Beeme on
Im so happy that you have a second book out, thats so great! I've never dyed my hair, so still dark brown :-) And I love to paint patterns on mostly other people's nails, they tell me I have a knack for it! I emailed Tony and he gave me the name of an editor for The Brittle Star magazine, so I emailed him, decided to buy a copy of the magazine before I submit anything, just to see what its like. So i'll see what happens. I really don't know whether any of my stuff will do, but I'll try! Beeme xx

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
Beeme morning bit grey and sluggy looking ugh! I didn't do the book never. correction. Few of us go and listen Authors like "Phil-Carr-Gomm" Title "Sacred Places" and can buy after. But as heavy and signed by "Phil-Carr-Gomm" I gave it away we did at fabulous wedding went to as it would go to my Priest one day. Never exspected see Author "Phil-Carr-Gomm" and saw his double just at moment as I stood looking for hubby! in George Street"Hove. I carried envelope as once someone said on Abc they carry pen and pad. I carried envelopes so it all happened god's timing and asked "Author -Phil-Carr-Gomm" his double! yes! him if could sign 2nd book now got from web: on the envelope same as before and wow kindly did. to Julie many blessings on her Christian journey so I got signature back. stop talking about myself! Readings going up! you julie xx cavalcaderl (:-

Submitted by Cavalcader on
Beeme so pleased something maybe in the pipe line expression I may have wrong words title "My Petit'e Cherie"= my pretty darling what ever.very late night on here? what you cleverly did reminds of church when I went regularly we used to do like Chants is it? have level number each side and one side sings verse first then other sounds really good. I see magazine out on here1 and publish do they charge some co: pay and pprint etc but one has to sell as well with SBN number to get money back costs printing.good luck. Do you know anything about The Forum on here is it you naughty girl my names is there? your get printed! so strange words paint your nails etc do. I was only messing about well! I'm trying think another one Dum de dum de dum ! de dum dumdy dumdy de!. maybe dances or what so ideas join in again? julie xx (:- alternate lines verse? julie xx (:-

Submitted by pinda on
Nice read :). when a cherry is picked she will be in her glory! when a cherry is picked you will reveal it proudly! Brilliantly written, Julie I think you got competiton coming your way. Beeme will be in your position in no time. P.s. Congratulation on the book julie x

Submitted by Beeme on
haha, I wish! x Thank you Pinda glad you enjoyed :)

k.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Pinda So much is happening Authors many go and meet one at time "Phil-Carr-Gomm" that night some I no tell me 5 in our group and many others go. great go into Borders and upstairs told Author on and a book meeting hope to buy books. This £20 "Sacred Places" brilliant and that crowned it to see him Sat;double and chat! and get 2nd one signed on an envelope I waited watched gurgled then spoke! are you! Author "Phil- Carr-Gomm" held my breath! yes.his 2nd book cover is different colour but fabulous ordered web: if not in shop, web; all beautifull stories and palates colour countries and Romans etc; how it was turned into holy sacred places after wars. and fights.There customs of life and lighted candle comes alight etc; right up to ceiling not flammable. that's enough done by person prayed I love it.also make your own sacred place be a bed shed a garden pillows soft music relax etc;well I want see Beeme win as so young inspiration young and old fight numbers going up pray+ julie oh put photo and profile on dress. beautiful.