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By lenchenelf

Mon, 30 Aug 2010

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There is something sad, almost lascivious,
in the way a Lily offers her summer ruin.
Fragile pink lips curl back, proffer of stamens
heavy in pollen, before her petals drop.

Admirable admiral, you pay a courtesy visit,
last cluster of florets, galaxy bunched
on the Buddleia, your universe, for today.

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minor edit 31.08.10

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'your universe for today.'

Permalink Submitted by littleditty on Tue, 2010-08-31 11:40

'your universe for today.' great endline, mature poem :) liked a lot x

This is great.

Permalink Submitted by staticshakedown on Tue, 2010-08-31 11:45

This is great.

Thank you Little D and S

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Tue, 2010-08-31 14:29

Thank you Little D and S Sdown, pleased you liked it. atb Lena xx

this is beautiful, such

Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on Tue, 2010-08-31 15:24

this is beautiful, such delicate imagery.

Thank you Maggy :-) atb lena

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Tue, 2010-08-31 17:43

Thank you Maggy :-) atb lena xx

I liked it too ;)lovely

Permalink Submitted by Highhat on Tue, 2010-08-31 19:09

I liked it too ;)lovely

Thanks High Hat :-) atb Lena

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Tue, 2010-08-31 20:33

Thanks High Hat :-) atb Lena xx

A nice update on Blake's 'To

Permalink Submitted by rjnewlyn on Tue, 2010-08-31 23:58

A nice update on Blake's 'To see the world in a grain of sand and heaven in a wild flower'. Captures an enormous amount in very few words. Well done! Rob

Thanks Rob, appreciated atb

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Wed, 2010-09-01 21:29

Thanks Rob, appreciated atb lena xx

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'your universe for today.'

This is great.

Thank you Little D and S

this is beautiful, such

Thank you Maggy :-) atb lena

I liked it too ;)lovely

Thanks High Hat :-) atb Lena

A nice update on Blake's 'To

Thanks Rob, appreciated atb

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