Elesha

By andrew-evans

Thu, 06 Jan 2011

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4 comments

Everytime I
Look into you
Eyes,I
See a billion
Happy memories, some only
A split second long
Many
Alot longer, the
Radiance of
Your smile, the
Diamond shine in your eye
Unmatched by others,
Not to mention your touch
Never cold or harsh,
Ever.

I
Love you.
Only you. You're the blood in my
Veins, you're the
Energy in my soul
You complete me, you're
Outstanding and I love you
Undeniably

Certificate U

Love

Comments

new andrew-evans Really

Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on Thu, 2011-01-06 20:27

new andrew-evans Really beautiful worded poem of flowing love. julie x

Some great phrasing, such

Permalink Submitted by jennifer on Thu, 2011-01-06 22:19

Some great phrasing, such as: 'the Diamond shine in you(r) eye' but you need to check some spellings! J x

this is lovely andrew - just

Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on Fri, 2011-01-07 13:47

this is lovely andrew - just radiance left to fix now I think - and veins

Thanks for all the spelling

Permalink Submitted by andrew-evans on Fri, 2011-01-07 14:57

Thanks for all the spelling mistake point outs, I really need to start writing in Ms word first, but sometimes i just get inspiration and want to write it straight on here.