anathema

By seannelson

Mon, 09 May 2011
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beat-up pick-up trucks
and worn out ideals
acid rain
and gasoline rainbows
(the stray cat
comes and goes
like a Cheshire feeling)

anathema
anathema

watered down philosophy
and feel-good irony,
the great metaphoric marathon
picking up where it started
going in circles
in and out the door,
burn it down
less is more

anathema

Certificate U
Poem
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Comments

Submitted by maisie on
very enjoyable... you could do 'less is more' a bit more though... and make the poem smaller by taking out odd words...

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

Submitted by Highhat on
no critique from me just plain good ;)Pia

Submitted by ScoZen on
snelson hello. I can just see them driving by. "...beat-up pick-up trucks..." through "...gasoline rainbows..." A philosopher on the road.
ScoZen

Submitted by seannelson on
thank you kindly Pia, everybody
"If I send you post-cards from the side of the road: photographs of movies, and hearts about to implode"  -  Elliott Smith