Serving Life
By well-wisher
Thu, 23 Jun 2011
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How long?
How long must I be locked
inside this tiny cell?
When will I see the light of life;
her sounds; her touch; her smells?
How long?
How long must I be cramped
in this windowless room?
Won’t someone please sever my bond;
rescue me from this gloom?
“Only a few more months”, she said,
talking to the dream in her womb.
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This one completely took me
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
This one completely took me by surprise at the end.
What a beautiful ending!
Jenny.
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Yes I wasn't expecting the
Yes I wasn't expecting the end either. But you know well-wisher personally I don't think the baby feels cramped- on the contrary I think he/she really loves the warmth and the heartbeat and being surrounded by so much security. Can you picture that maybe? No offence meant- I promise you. Haven't you ever wished yourself back in the womb? I have-
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;)Pia
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I wish I could have seen
I wish I could have seen that deep well-wisher !!
;)Pia
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