Nature in the City
By Ray Schaufeld
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i had been lost then i was
i had been lost then i was found' biblical, yet with your own unique slant. Not sure what the IP was, but I like this.
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Growing up in Bristol, I was
Growing up in Bristol, I was drawn to this poem. I really enjoyed all your descriptions. Thank you for sharing. Jenny.
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You made me really think
You made me really think about our use of nature images to cheer and soften walls of the city, and in our own homes, and even our clothing! Rhiannnon
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Hello Elsie,
Hello Elsie,
An excellent attempt at the I.P. I couldn't find inspiration for this one.
Moya
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This is a solid poem,
This is a solid poem, skilfully structured with a great rhythm. The little bits of green and untouched nature scattered around a city can jump out at us all the more because of their surroundings; I think concrete provides a good contrast and makes us appreciate "the thrill of beauty" even more.
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I enjoyed this poem, Elsie,
I enjoyed this poem, Elsie, it has an up beat feel to it that is very pleasing.
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