Night-thoughts

By Parson Thru

Mon, 01 Jun 2015

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9 comments

It always seems set against you

Victories

Little wins
eclipsed by failure

If you stand still
it overtakes you

I guess that's why
you have to keep on moving

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I've just had one of those

Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on Mon, 2015-06-01 06:27

I've just had one of those nights...:( Great poem, I recognise all of it.

No fun, eh?

Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on Mon, 2015-06-01 08:57

No fun, eh?

Parson Thru

Neat.

Permalink Submitted by Bee on Mon, 2015-06-01 07:08

Neat.

Bee

Beautifully concise comment,

Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on Mon, 2015-06-01 08:59

Beautifully concise comment, Bee.

Parson Thru

Thank you cherry-picker.

Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on Mon, 2015-06-01 08:59

Thank you cherry-picker.

Parson Thru

I often feel the same. I like

Permalink Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on Mon, 2015-06-01 17:31

I often feel the same. I like the short and succinct way of expressing this thought.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Thanks, actuallyexisting.

Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on Mon, 2015-06-01 21:27

Thanks, actuallyexisting. Love that name.

Parson Thru

So many will relate to this.

Permalink Submitted by EB on Mon, 2015-06-01 19:11

So many will relate to this. Me included.

Very neatly put.

Thank you EB. It's good to

Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on Mon, 2015-06-01 21:28

Thank you EB. It's good to connect.

Parson Thru

Night-thoughts

By Parson Thru

Comments

I've just had one of those

No fun, eh?

Neat.

Beautifully concise comment,

Thank you cherry-picker.

I often feel the same. I like

Thanks, actuallyexisting.

So many will relate to this.

Thank you EB. It's good to

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