What Am I?
By Silver Spun Sand
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Lots and lots I liked in this
Lots and lots I liked in this one sand lady.
Plus two new words for me "...ambergris..." and "...Sara-Orange-Tip..."
And I have been privileged to witness "...a murmuration of a million starlings..."
Kind regards
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a collection of noticed
a collection of noticed moments of beauty or interest … I suppose that is what poetry so often tries to capture and 'frame' for oneself and others? Rhiannon
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Such a sense of freedom in
Such a sense of freedom in this piece, Tina. Step inside the mind and we can be anywhere - there is no prison can hold us, and poetry is just an expression of your wonderful imagination.
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an immersive treat, beautiful
an immersive treat, beautiful images and alliterative touches, lovely use of sound and sensation within the images...'sculpting circles in a flute of champagne' and the wonderful 'a murmuration/of a million starlings', fantastic work :)
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