Postcard from L4

By Parson Thru

Wed, 07 Feb 2018
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Everybody on the Metro is sick.

Watery sniffs, like the dripping

of rain to the forest floor.

You’d love it.

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Parson Thruses Dairy
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Comments

Submitted by celticman on

illness a metaphor for love, perhaps it's infectious. 

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

There's a whole lotta love on the Metro, celt.

Parson Thru

Submitted by PoetonaHill on

Actually I do love it. This little poem paints an everyday picture of journeys to and from town in many cities.

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Thank you Poetonahill.

Sniff!

Parson Thru

Submitted by mickleinapickle on

I think some authority should hand out free tissues in crowded places in winter. The health of the nation would improve drastically and the NHS would coast it.

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Worth a try. People sell them on street corners and passing along less crowded Metro trains here.

Parson Thru

Submitted by Kat027 on

Ewww! Apt metaphor, but ..... ewww! LOL 'Tis the season for colds and flu! Well done.

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

:))))

Some things call for minor adjustments here and there.

Parson Thru