I Would Rather

By Richard L. Provencher

Sat, 22 Dec 2018

3 comments

be a colourful smile

than a nasty attitude

upon your back

so I may uplift with yellow

and green

to lift you high

upon this

day. Yes I can be bright

with love’s delight

and bring it your way.

Permalink Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on Sat, 2018-12-22 12:07

Richard L. Provencher

Permalink Submitted by Nolan on Sat, 2018-12-22 15:57

A beautiful happy little poem Richard! Just the start sounds a bit odd I don't quite understand it.. "Sunshine on your shoulders" is that it?

& Nolan

Permalink Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on Sat, 2018-12-22 23:56

Thank you Nolan for your critiquing -- I appreciate it. Do my changes get the point across a little better? Chimo.

Richard L. Provencher