Freo Doctor

By Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu, 05 Mar 2020
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Freo
Doctor

 

Fluffy

birds paused

full-fronting the sea breeze.

Two wanderers grip fine wire,

then gone.

 

Frances Macaulay Forde © 2014

Certificate U
Poem
Art is the Spark
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Not only the birds enjoy the breeze I presume! I had to look up what Freo Doctor was. I enjoy crisp, concise nature poems. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Frances Macaula... on

Thank you for your comment, Rhiannon, I love birds and we're very lucky to have so many in the Australian suburbs.    It helps my process to use the framework of French Cinquain or Tanka or Haiku, to encapsulate an idea.

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Submitted by Parson Thru on

Lovely. And the brevity of the moment is perfect.

Imagine an Ode to Them...

No. You've captured it.

Parson Thru