"japanese garden" -tanka

Cherry

By Tretchicovmanicova

Sun, 23 Jan 2022
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6 comments
 

gentle, grey footpath
surrounded by rust maple
trees, butterflies, bees
and colourful flowers. a
bird lands on a slender branch.

 

©'t. imaan tretchicovmanicova 
23jan22

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Comments

Submitted by Mark Say on

A vivid and beguiling image; good to raise a smile.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Sounds like a gorgous place to meditate and flourish.

You don't even need a picture with such evoking words.

Very much enjoyed.

Jenny.

 

 

Submitted by animan on

 

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

you create a perfect sense of peace in your poem, a little world. It is beautiful, and works each time I come back to read again

 

Submitted by donignacio on

This reminds me of my favorite fall memories. I can just smell it. Thank you!

 

Submitted by Tretchicovmanicova on

Thank you for the kind feedback and comments towards my tanka.