circles and rings

By Nolan

Wed, 28 Jan 2026
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7 comments
 

hand in hand your hand my hand
my hand yours
ring and ring my ring your ring
charms that stole my heart
flame and faith will win your ring
chained circles cycle complete
rings of fire
oh to kiss and touch
circling cycles round round around

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forever young
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Romance
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Comments

Submitted by TJW on

You need more Johnny Cash in your lfie, my man.

V/R

 

Submitted by Nolan on

& my woman's love

 

Submitted by TJW on

That's a dangerous possessive adjective to use with a woman.

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Thanks &

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Your verse is very concentrated, and sometimes takes me a while to get my head into it. Just come back to this one, and intrigued really by the picture of the united couple being like a circle, like the ring on their finger, and the trust and warmth symbolised in 'faith and flame'. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Nolan on

passion fire

Thanks Rhiannon! I always want to bring in the passionate in love and as warning too of dangers, as well as being bound together and forever, as One. And the repitition through the ages of love of unending generations "though lovers be lost, love thall not" – DT

This poem still needs just a bit of editing.

Nolan &

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Thanks Rhiannon! I always want to bring in the passionate in love and as warning too of dangers, as well as being bound together and forever, as One. And the repitition through the ages of love of unending generations "though lovers be lost, love thall not" – DT

This poem still needs just a bit of editing.

Nolan &