Scented Dreams

By Ama_G
Wed, 13 Nov 2013
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She dreamt a dream
flavored by the scent of his skin
a delicious dream painted amber
across her marred and frigid lips
His skin was golden
like a ginkgo's leaves in the autum
falling, as to sleep
and warm
like the departing sun's goodnight kiss
before the rapture of her wakeful
darkness.
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This is lovely Ama. Great
This is lovely Ama. Great choice of words in every line. The opening line " She dreamt a dream flavored by the scent of his skin." Got my attention straightaway!
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You got the dreamlike feel to
You got the dreamlike feel to this really well.
Enjoyed.
Bee
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