'Love - Hard Boiled'
By Art of the Diver
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‘Love - Hard Boiled’
“H ow about a real breakfast?” she squirmed
“A sk me again when I’ve eaten this one” he replied
R arely did they talk with their mouths full
D ark sheets rumpled the light touch of pleasured dawn
B irthday greetings glow then fade away
O ver time the thought truly counts
“I could spend could spend my whole life in this moment!”
“L ove does that when everything fits”
E ventually though, our lives will change, fulfilled by this
D ream and the power of this vividly silken memory…
*~ Pearldiver ~
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Clever use of acrostic.
Clever use of acrostic. Lovely thoughts behind it too 
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Hahaha... I was always led
Hahaha... I was always led to believe breakfast is the most important meal of the day. Thank you for reminding me of that thought Holly 
Rob
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' R arely did they talk with
' R arely did they talk with their mouths full'
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Why thank you for your ever
Why thank you for your ever tastfully subtle comments Elliott... always greatly appreciated 
Rob
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Great take on the I P.
Great take on the I P. Moment captured in a poem.
Jenny.
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Thank you for that Jenny...
Thank you for that Jenny... oh yes and a lifetime of wondering if certain feelings and emotions will ever be able to be bottled! 
Rob
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