Half-light

By Beeme

Thu, 24 Mar 2011
  • 1276 reads
6 comments
 

It’s too dark,
the curve of your fingers
search the dimensions of air,
flickering…
laced with gold
setting a trail of light.
Which I follow,
like a star-struck moth.

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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Beeme, I really love this poem, it's really magical. Thankyou for the magical read. Jenny.

 

Submitted by fatboy74 on
like it Beeme. :-)

 

Submitted by rjnewlyn on
Yes - small but perfectly formed. Rob

 

Submitted by seashore on
Really good!

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
very vivid - I agree with Sundays

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you all so much for your lovely comments, I'm really happy you enjoyed! :D It means a lot xxxx

k.