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Cherry

By blighters rock

Fri, 19 Jun 2015
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Of course there are angels out there

they're there

just waiting for us to show ourselves

to be who we are

and at that time

they will appear

as spiders

trying

trying just to touch us

for a moment

two beings being 

never knowing where we're going.

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Submitted by VeraClark on

This is lovely. Subtle and delicate. Made me think of whispers and lonely hearts and touching. And hope.

 

Submitted by EB on

They will appear as spiders - I like that because even as they try to touch us, unknowing, we might not let them. Gently written. 

Submitted by love_writing on

Beautiful. 'Two beings being, never knowing where we're going' 

love_writing

Submitted by Bee on

Delicately done.

Bee

Submitted by jolono on

Nice one blighters. Cracking last two lines!

 

Submitted by blighters rock on

Thanks for reading this, lovely people.

 

Submitted by Stephen Thom on

excellent poem lovely unique images&sparkling final two lines :-)

 

Submitted by celticman on

how many spiders would balance on the tip of a full stop? I wish there was angels. All I see are devils. 

 

Submitted by blighters rock on

Cheers Stephen, much appreciated.

Oh Celt, like I believe that. We're surrounded by the beauties

 

 

Submitted by RJF on

This is so beautiful Blighters, I hope you are right. R