"CROCODILE TEARS" Did You Know (True.)

By Cavalcader

Sun, 28 Mar 2010
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CROCODILE TEARS - PART 1

A water drought
It lays there
lifeless!

It's eyes are closed
you would think in a doze
Elongated body
absolutely still

Until rain and water comes
one big green eye
will rotate
and the scales

on his back each one
opens! like ventilators
and little mirrors
as the crocodiles blood flows

and air comes in
Quivers! and shivers!
till the peep of the sun
as it get's warmer

He gradually
begins to alter
His strength had gone
and energy too

Suddenly!
The little legs
one by one
Like a sloth! will move

A heavy body learning to breathe
It is so thankful!
For the water and rain
Sun and moon

I have cried! so many crocodile
tears in my life!
It states in dictionary
when it devours

Its' victims to
allure them
Weeps crocodile tears

And the children have no water!
In countries to drink!
and sanitation
that is very sad too

It cries crocodile tears
Not sure if true!
When!
There is so much one can do."

CROCODILE TEARS - PART 2

A water drought
He lays there
lifeless!

Are we like that!
In the sun get burnt up
Put our sun- cream and glasses on
and lay for hours
maybe it should wear them too

Do watch the sun
It will frizzle you like
A sausage too

I fell asleep on the beach
when young
Looked like
A red tomato!"

Luckily a friend
took me home
and my brothers
and sister too

Taken home by car
Do we ever learn!
The bed sheets
one could hardly bear
Now we know what a Crocodile
goes through

Just a little bit
of the sun is good
A fair skin burns quickly

One can not master the sea
never go out to deep!
The lungs are for breathing
and the bodies to move.

Certificate U
Poem
Autobiography

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Kheldar Hi David like comments and advice, as re-done,poem now (IP) "7 Minutes Of Pop's Life" As Editor read to,said jumbled true, be worth re-doing and worth while,again and again. sO have one comment likes it as it was.As after MistakenMagic nice comment,I carried on past and present out of order and skills and when he died,out o order.Now ne version,beginning,middle,and end. And good poets,can say and tell me what think and ideas.Now added Title "Sands Of Time". I was up very late re-changing, it,some from my "Mangled Mess Of Life's Experiences".bits in bits left out.So need all experts. daughter and hubby never flwe to Spain cos.the volcano burst and flights cancelled.etc;might go Sat; so under great pressure,not knowing all messages if any.or not told,none.Mobiles? Hope your well. Have a good week-end julie xx

Submitted by Nolan on
Part I is beautifully descriptive: “It's eyes are closed you would think in a doze Elongated body absolutely still one big green eye will rotate and the scales on his back each one opens! like ventilators and little mirrors and air comes in Quivers! and shivers! till the peep of the sun He gradually begins to alter His strength had gone and energy too Suddenly! The little legs one by one Like a sloth! will move” Good! Makes one think of a space-craft preparing for take-off. You know like those good old SF movies: Battlestar Galactica, Star-Wars, Moonbase Alpha… All you need still are the sound-effects. (What has become of our faith? Finding now every and any reason why a thing must be impossible, instead of dreaming? May-be, how, maybe? Dreams instead of doubt… Nolan && “A pessimist is a man who sees the sun set in the East.” (When are you doing the green-eyed thing again?
 

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New Nolan Thankyou comments and typing some of it,I wasn't doing it again.Re;Green Eye. Is that what you mean.I asked help and ideas,and Kheldar,David did so,and suggestions I took his way and advice.So pleased I let him help me.But I pressed the wrong button and put it as a story,it was poem. As I mentioned it was t.v. programme so,interesting I watched crocodile laying there.Though I will try poem on it, but most came re-adjusted by Kheldar David.Or some ideas and a word here there. Yep! I remeber "Star Wars" great."Star Trek" and quite a few more.Hubby always watches them. Did you want me to do green eye again then. Or what idea had you.Oh! "The Clangers" were good looked like little mice. managed answer to-night for you.You missed line or two,of poem and 2nd half.Did you mean to. julie x

Submitted by Nolan on
Pinky and the Brain? Go for it!
 

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And yes I skipped some lines &&
 

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Nolan Oh! I thought so,did you want me to change it then? Who is Pinky=Pig and the brains of who. Re-Grren Eye,I see " strangely enough DVD out to-morow "Avatar" has big Green Eye". But re-minds me of,Cyclops, the Greek giant with the one eye, story in the middle of the forehead. I hated picture scary.When small. Which also related to "Crocodile Tears" both eyes closed and gradually rate my word, Cat's eye's too go slanted and open. What topic do you want,or I will try a poem. Thanks. julie

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-Nolan Computer sluggish,copied 3 times same,so deleted. julie

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-Nolan deleted as computer done it three times. julie

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.Nolan What do you mean,comment 6: 4 green eyes. Are youe talking of "Green Eyes" the cat poem. Or green eye of the Crocodile tears. What is a pinky brains. Please explain. thankyou. julie it's cavalcader L is a mistake. Comes from Noel Coward's play Cavalcader my mum and I in 1995 she asked me to go with her and we got in as extras.Theatre Royal great all the celebs;and people and children we met. Hard work. Jeremy Clyde and Gabriel Drake etc. I stood and chatted next to me,before going on. Big head! me what an experience. That's enough from me. Yes, I have found it your comment,on "Green Eyes" my cat poem. Thanks,maybe could explain in more detail,if you wouldn't mind. julie x cavalcader

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Calcabaderl : Green eyes 6 : 4
 

Submitted by Nolan on
Dear old calcabaderl $ Of Mice and Men $ Featuring *Pinkybrain and the WeeWeely* “What’s up doc?”, “Nothing much” THE PLOT: I have to be brutally honest, “The plan that went astray.”
 

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new Nolan Thank's think.mine said comes from "RicHARD tHE 3rd. Don't know much about? "The Clanger's used to whistle not talk,good.No feel free,cooment but if I can't grasp it.Or agree. Don't worry.It may have been bad,day for me? I am sure many on here! will also write,if you want answewrs ask.Like some mine,now I have commented to long,like an Agony Aunt.Me. Enjoy it all though,questions,ideas similiar situations.Experiences of lives.It's just I didn't quite understand last few rhymes of lines you put.OK. so if happens on anything,I don't reply to all,of some,or ask explain. Thanks julie (x) cavalcader (:- julie

Submitted by Nolan on
If a person declares, "I have to be brutally honest" it usually means "I shall now lie straight faced through my teeth." If a guy says "with all respect" it usually means exactly the opposite. It is, just, so. The story of pinkybrain was sucked from my thumb, it has no meaning (unless maybe, someone thinks it does, and in that case, it probably has!) It's love that makes the world go 'round- Satchmo. Cheers Madame Calcabaderl! && (I've now got a green eyes of my own! Just made himself at home, just like that. Black cat & green-eyes. Dunno if the name is "Jazz” he ignores me. I think he’ll weed out the mice.)
 

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New Nolan Well done!on the cat,sure your make it very happy,talk to it,and stroke. Listen to it purr!What are you calling it. Yes,good mousers that the word.Umm! "Green Eyes" Let me know what you name it,and how it goes. Ball of silver paper on a string play.Your right definitely love,makes the world go round,different ways.I am no madam.thanks. julie x

Submitted by Nolan on
I think it’s a tomcat
 

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new Nolan Let em know what it's like colour,and a name. julie

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Will do. When I see him again... As I said, a rover &&
 

Submitted by Nolan on
Dear old Calcabaderl He’s back! Probably ‘cause it’s so cold and rainy. When I went out to the veranda today there he was curled up in my favourite chair on the pillow. Now I have to sit on a plastic garden chair. He’s bit neglected I don’t think he’s got a home. Jett black. Eyes clear cruel green. Some scars I think he’s a fighter. Stroke him he doesn’t purr in fact he tried to bite me. Just twitches his tail like he’s stalking a bird or what Bit on the wild side. A cat chooses it’s owner not other way round. This one looks like he’s seriously jealous. He’s very lazy. He’s lovely. His name is “Rover”. Regards Nolan PS. Can you tell me, how does a cat know where it’s home is?
 

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new Nolan So glad cat Rover is back! At first I thought you had bought one,my mistake.Tom's canbew spiteful.But could been illtreated.Rover's a good name then for him. Did you have some fish,or chicken,would have smelt and come back.Watch that bite,daughter's three cat's,now ginger one odd ways,know fact I hear.Tap a saucer and Rover come back. Well I think it's a smell or scent they remember. Pop died,his lady friend too it, Tom lived near sea-front.But it was found in dad's garden,but one had previously been buried there in those days.I think width od cat's whiskers tell them how wide a gap is get through.Maybe he took to you or liked warmth of the chair.Most like bird's and frogs,anything that moves,the Tom's.Ginger fragile when little,we had two ne ginger one,chase it under the bed,and take limps of fur out of it.Jealous oh yes. chilly out popped into artists open day,very interesting for me,yesterday.Quite a fae ginger cat's,look at you from a place near,dart under plastic gardening bags,or brown paper,very timid. julie

Submitted by Nolan on
Shadow. That is the name of my cruel-green eyed cat &&
 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Nolan Well a very nice name! I remember song, "Me and My Shadow". Before your time.Thank's sharing his name. You can make a good poem up on "Shadow. "Green Eyed" well you don;t know his background, much do you.Keep loving him,put on some gloves protection. julie x

Submitted by Nolan on
Shadow is missing. Four days now. Hope not something dreadful he wasn’t run over or kidnapped. Maybe he comes back again.
 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Nolan A "Shadow" follows one, remember never goes away. So keep hoping, tempt,bit of food on a saucer.Or chink1 a dish and call it's name.Don't forget something made him come to you.They can dig claws in one,if sit on your lap,happy.Or stare at you,most of time come to you.Cat fight here!sometimes.bit like children or people,like to try to be best,get there own ways, in things.Dominatate. differences.Does "Shadow" wear a collar,maybe he liked "Rover." I am sure he will come back. julie x

Submitted by Nolan on
Dear Mz Calcabaderl. Shadow came back! Maybe it’s because the weather’s cleared up- sunshine you see. But he came back Monday night. So he is a Moonshadow. He wags his tail like a dog when you stroke him. I think he’s a bit wild. Is it so? That one can feed cats with chicken and fish? I thought they ate only cat pellets. Must it be cooked? Would like to give him a live mouse. My Shadow has the most deadly green eyes. Nolan PS. Jerry next door’s been a nuisance I had to move He discovered a remote re-set for my PC. Long-distance hardboot. The reason I’ve been quiet. Other than that I’m quite happy here.
 

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new Nolan Glad Shadow has returned.Well always cook chicken first,and fish. But a tin of cat food,try.Say no to milk,we always as children gave our's milk. and my belated Mum, to said butter on the paws stopped them running away.Not aure about that. Weathe is getting warmer.I hope.Maybe get up market to-morrow.Why not buy "Shadow", a name tag. Have a good week-end julie cavalcader.

Submitted by Nolan on
He has a name. Thanks you too!
 

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Mrs Calcabaderl, You can't put a collar on a cat surely? He'll scratch his neck bald and he'll scratch the skin raw. It can't work. Maybe if you started out with a kitten. Have to come up with another plan. Have a great week! Nolan
 

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Nolan Hi.most have a flea collar on. I haven't got a cat we haven't of our own. But brought up with them, I don't think it matters on age of cat. HoW's "Shadow". Julie x

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