Spare a thought ..

By denni1

Sun, 24 Nov 2013
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When there's no one there to wipe your tears
And clock tick tick's off many years
Don't be thinking no one cares
We all do

Those creaking bones don't hold your weight
You stay awake, stay up late
Afraid of falling down, don't forget
We care for you

You must believe that you're a gem
With fading sight and trusting hands
Dignified yet winding down
To leave us, missing you

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Food for thought in this poem denni...a deep and meaningful read.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by Bee on

Hi Denni.

These are kind and thoughtful words. 

Bee

Submitted by denni1 on

Awwww .. thanks for your support

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Quite a little gem, did you give it to the person? Rhiannon

 

Submitted by denni1 on

Thanks Bear. I'm very happy you took time to read it. No Rhiannon, cos it was about the old boy in my latest story. Hope he's alright!! Thanks a bunch for reading n commenting