Loneliness
By Donalvin5
Tue, 31 Jul 2012
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It’s not just a state of being
It becomes a lifestyle
More like a reality
You live in it
You sulk in it
You fight to stay away from it
But it always gets to you
I never meant for it to be this way
Never meant for it to feel this bad
But what can you do when it creeps near
When it arrives
It consumes you
The darkness of it kills you
It swallows you
There’s no ending because it seems to never end
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Great poem Donalvin5. It's a
Great poem Donalvin5.
It's a fresh piece which is awesome the way it is, but it also has the potential to be enhanced a lot more.
Natalia
Natalia :)
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I liked this one, bleak but
I liked this one, bleak but true.
Loneliness is underestimated in my view.
regards
ScoZen
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