Soul is important to live.

By Gurpratap singh

Wed, 27 May 2020
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We say, when a person dies the soul leaves the body. It’s not true it’s misleading.

The body knows when the soul leaves irrespective of wether one is alive or not. 

It is meaningless to live without a soul, you are as good as a dead man. 

 Ask a soulless man.

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Submitted by Gurpratap singh on

Hello everyone!

I just started writing. I dont know what is it call ? But this is something which is in a heart gor a long and many  other similar writing which I am willing to post. 
please share your comments on what you think. 
 Thank you.

 

Submitted by airyfairy on

Hi!  Welcome to ABC Tales.  I hope you will enjoy your time on the site.

Interesting to read your thoughts on this.  Have you thought about developing your ideas a little further and writing a longer piece?  Fine if not - the important thing is that you enjoy what you write and achieve what you set out to do.  Thank you for sharing your writing.

Submitted by Gurpratap singh on

 I will try to write a little long. 
Thank you. 

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Personally I think more like CS Lewis "You do not have a soul, you are a soul".

No this is very good, I would say in general the shorter the better.

Gurpratap Singh I do see talent! Welcome to Abc! Learn the ropes!

Nolan &&

 

Submitted by Gurpratap singh on

Thank you. 

 

Submitted by peterelbee on

Hi Gurptratrap 

I like your thoughts here. So the next stage would be to expand this into a story in which the main character finds himself/herself losing his soul. Detail what or who caused it, what effect it has on him/her and how he/she regains it (if at all). Of course this will also require complications that the main character must overcome in order to retrive his/her soul.

Good luck.

peterelbee    

 

Submitted by Gurpratap singh on

On it . 
thank you