Quietude

By Kahdai

Wed, 29 Sep 2010
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Thanks to skinner_jennifer & Pia (Highhat)

I whisper to the wind
songs under my breath
words for me remember
all the orange leaves
dance down from trees
twirling persuasively
I spin looking upward
then laughing and run
home to write my poem
thank for inspiration
helps put me in words.

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
How lovely Kahdai, you brought a tear to my eye, with this poem, it's so beautiful. Thankyou. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Aaw,! well thanks to you! :) K x

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Love the title, Kahdai. A beautiful poem too - full of joie de vivre ;) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
I think thats nice, title is Pia s comment on Jennys poem October magic. Oh & what 'joie de vivre' mean? :) xxx K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Translated from the French it literally means 'the joy of life' - used to describe something that has a lot of spirit and love ;) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by insertponceyfre... on
it is lovely, and Magic is right about the joie de vivre too

 

Submitted by Highhat on
That's the spirit Kahdai- lots of love for nature- beautiful words- and thanks for being inspired by me as well- great- glad to know I could do it ;D pia

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thanks everyone thats great (now I know it was french!) Pia its a lovely word! Kahdai xx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "