Erlkonig or Turbid Isidor
By LadyOtilia
Thu, 14 Jul 2011
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Erlkonig or Turbid Isidor
When I was little I was told
A woman waits for me with
Turbid eyes like the water
In my mother’s womb
And I will eat her food
She holds me in her spells and
I’ve known her face since I was a child
Woman I hear your musty blood through the veins
I am the Erlking don’t you know
Who sends your sibling after the milk of wolves
You won’t see him again
So make a doll and feed it and give it
His name. All of you, you stay out of my way
I didn’t ask to be born
I will rise with my knights against you
But not you, woman, not against you.
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I don't know what it's about
I don't know what it's about but I like the way you use words. :-)
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i enjoyed this peice, yet I
i enjoyed this peice, yet I felt you let it go when you used 'don't you know', which weakened the whole thing.
you can disagree if you like - feel free to crit mine:)
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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