Bare bones
By Louise178
Thu, 02 Dec 2010
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The bare bones of cold life
wooden table dining chairs
comfy sofa
blank tv screen
deathly silence
of solitary living.
The bare bones of cold wind
as snow falls again
pushed here and there
by winter air
a cruel season
from a plastic window.
The bare bones of cold thoughts
have no reasoning
compassion is lost
no warmth or gentleness
just strange bleak
cold morbidity.
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another beautifully written
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
another beautifully written slice of a very bleak life - it made me shiver
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I love this, Louise, bleak
Permalink Submitted by TREVOR MAYTUM on
I love this, Louise, bleak imagery. I felt it too.
trev
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Nice work, Louise. I really
Nice work, Louise. I really liked it. Cherries well-deserved.
sue
TVR
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'no warmth or
'no warmth or gentleness
just strange bleak
cold morbidity.'
Oddly beautiful. :-)
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