Haiku-1

By Basket case

Tue, 10 Feb 2015

5 comments

Sad soul was wailing,
in the quiet dusky night,
darkness was laughing.

Permalink Submitted by celticman on Tue, 2015-02-10 10:20

I like the idea of darkness laughing.

Permalink Submitted by Basket case on Tue, 2015-02-10 10:39

Yeah, sort of ironically:)

Basket Case

Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on Tue, 2015-02-10 18:36

Love the change of tone.

Permalink Submitted by Basket case on Wed, 2015-02-11 03:52

thanks :D

Basket Case

Permalink Submitted by rosaliekempthorne on Sun, 2015-12-27 08:07

really good, conveying a lot of emotion, and nicely contained inside the haiku structure.