It
By thanksfortheparakeets@gmail.com
Wed, 25 Aug 2010
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Peeking through the flap, I saw it. The dark pool around her head. On the carpet. The stillness of it. The gravity of it. Hit me; this is it.
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I like this! Not sure if it
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I like this! Not sure if it even counts as micro fiction though
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oh no! It wasn't meant as a
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oh no! It wasn't meant as a criticism (in a bad way) - I was just impressed at how you'd managed to put so much into so few words! Sorry if it sounded negative, it wasn't intended to be
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