Half-titled
By queen beatle
Thu, 19 Dec 2024
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When thrust upon my own devices
I wander off and find myself
picking apples and dropping them
uneaten on the grass
or I find myself devouring them
from the trees, unplucked
and filling my wake with gaunt cores
gnawed heads nodding on the breeze.
We sculpt the world by holding it
leave the unheld to sculpt itself
and scupper the half-held, half-eaten
on half of its own devices.
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Classically imagistic. I like
Classically imagistic. I like the final stanza, in particular.
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You certainly
You certainly make a person think there is clearly much deeper to this. Eden. Could be. Snow White?The title? All kinds of meaning to be read.
I read all your poems and think on them. All the best! Tom
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