Moleheart
By queen beatle
Fri, 04 Dec 2020
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Watching you work, I realise
You move like a field:
Cotton skirts swaying,
Running hands over gossamer dew.
Aboveground, you're all petty birds and sunshine.
Leaves tighten on their stems
As the land's crust hushes.
Darkness looms and coldness drags
And I curl up in spider death.
Your mole heart thumps
As you vanish the headless worms
Bedraping your larder.
The tunnels are seabed black
And the soil gets up my snout.
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more mature
Your work is more mature but just as beautiful as the naive early poetry. The contrast is actually quite fascinating.
&& Nolan
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only one problem
There is only one problem with your writing: There is too little of it.
Nolan &&
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