Deckchair Dreams


By Schubert
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He closes his eyes against the sun and listens
to the picture it paints as
vivid sounds daub the canvas,
brushing thick layers against recollection
The voices of children, untouched by life,
blend effortlessly with the whispering tide
as it tugs gently against the moon's
sweet allure
Pure innocent joy applies without reserve
in cobalt, ochre and aquamarine,
surging across the moment
as it laps against primordial memory
And the whole glorious vista is varnished
by screams of untarnished delight,
overlaying simple pleasure across
his glorious canvas
And then, as if to sully the work,
unnatural hews taint the palette
with ugly sound, raucous and man made
Defacing his glorious reverie
He opens his eyes against the glare
and they are there, harsh and unnatural
defacing his perfection
with unchecked discourtesies
But they soon pass, and he resumes his quest
searching sound waves for the blissful grace
of unbridled honesty that ushers him
untroubled into artful dream
And soon, as children's joy layers upon
Neptune's whispering, a blissful seascape
seduces his consciousness into a place
where nothing but heavenly perfection exists
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Such a wonderful blending of
Such a wonderful blending of the senses - the colours and sounds are so vivid, and I was going to say scents as well, and then realised how very clever this is, because you haven't specified any scents, but I could smell the sea!
Lovely IP response.
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Jollies
Great use of colour here Schubert, which is good because in my experience holidays are always colorful events both literally and metaphorically.
Sadly, knotted handerchiefs are predominantly white.
Turlough
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Hi Paul, I could absolutely
Hi Paul, I could absolutely see that picture you painted with words. I too love to sit and meditate, closing eyes and imagining is really useful when compiling a poem. This one was gorgeous.
Jenny.
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