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Cherry

By seannelson

Fri, 27 Jan 2012
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5 comments
 

lazy as the warm buzz
of summer flies,
head as blank
as a summer chalkboard
or an Arctic mile,
stripped of furniture
stripped of wile
stripped of excessive restraint
stripped of bile

chemical umbrella
artificial May
opioid sunrise
cannabis sativa day
hot coffee rays

Certificate 18
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by the unfolding head on
yassss... "stripped of excessive restraint" indeed :) nice.

ddf

Submitted by Highhat on
loved the opening lines Sean- an arctic mile- wonderful,wonderful little poem.. hope you're well? ;)Pia

Submitted by seannelson on
Hello Pia. I'm up and down, but on the whole not too bad. thanks for asking <]:- )
"If I send you post-cards from the side of the road: photographs of movies, and hearts about to implode"  -  Elliott Smith

Submitted by scratch on
Sean, you've put some wonderful words together here. Great poetry can communicate and this does it in buckets.

 

Submitted by shoe on
Nicely done, love that arctic mile.