Around Surround

By Shannan

Wed, 26 Oct 2011
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So much bustle all around me.
People talking,
Teacups clinking,
Laughter echoing.

Mobiles, Iphones,
Ringing, reading,
Texting, talking,
Mouths, fingers, working.

People listening,
Some avoiding,
Faces expressing,
Subtly, openly.

So much bustle all around me.
I sit quietly…
Observing… writing…
Lonely

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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
This poem makes me glad I'm out of the rat race. Very thought provoking. Thankyou for sharing. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Shannan on
My Pleasure! Thanks for your comment - I agree that the rat race lacks MANY things! Shannan