Eine Kleine Nachtmusik

"hope, eclipsing ink-black water " what a wonderful image Tina. I enjoyed this-Mozart was such a genius- did you see Amadeus? 400 years and still going strong. Pretty clever , eh? atb ;)Pia have a lovely wednesday.

Thanks, so much, Pia...and

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Thu, 2011-07-21 10:33

Thanks, so much, Pia...and you have a lovely Thursday, too;-)Oh, and by the way, yes I did see Amadeus. AMAZING;-) Like the man himself, indeed! Tina

I agree with Pia about this

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Thu, 2011-07-21 17:29

I agree with Pia about this poem and would pick out the lines she picked out too. Such wonderful descriptions. Hope you are well and having a good day. Jenny.

Thanks, Jenny;-) Pleased

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Thu, 2011-07-21 19:08

Thanks, Jenny;-) Pleased you enjoyed. Yes, have had a lovely day, thank you, despite the downpours, and I hope you've managed to dodge them. Tina

Ah yes - very wonderful.

Permalink Submitted by rjnewlyn on Thu, 2011-07-21 22:32

Ah yes - very wonderful. Just like night-music and amazing last three lines. A good antidote to a dull rainy day. Rob

Thanks, Rob. I shall try and

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Fri, 2011-07-22 10:25

Thanks, Rob. I shall try and send some sunshine to you, as you did to me;-) Tina

... hope, eclipsing

Permalink Submitted by barryj1 on Thu, 2011-07-21 22:46

... hope, eclipsing ink-black water. Well, that's an optimistic note to end on. I like poems that tell stories, which this one does rather effortlessly. Nice!

barryj1

Thanks, barry;-) Have a

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Fri, 2011-07-22 10:19

Thanks, barry;-) Have a good weekend. Tina

new Silver-Spun-Sand well

Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on Thu, 2011-07-21 23:17

new Silver-Spun-Sand well deserved cherry! tina and enjoyed very good way of the story. No wet yesterday for n/home had sit on wet skirt etc; buses packed so half an hour late, and person finished half an hour early so only two songs, my fault being late. I wish you a "Very Happy Anniversary to-morrow Friday" 22nd July 2011. and to your's have a Wonderful day,AND ALL YOUR DREAMS COME TRUE. and Full of Surprises I hope, and the champagne, HUGS AND KISSES. INCASE I am up late, or out shop quickly. all the best julie xx

Thanks for reading this one,

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Fri, 2011-07-22 10:24

Thanks for reading this one, Julie. And you remembered our anniversary. Thanks, so much. We have to pinch ourselves to think it was forty-four years ago today we tied that knot. A lot has happened since then; for worse and more importantly, for the better, so we have much to be thankful for. Shall pass on your good wishes to my other half and thanks again;-) Have a lovely weekend. Tina xx

new Silver spun-sand If only

Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on Fri, 2011-07-22 14:22

new Silver spun-sand If only I knew what I know now. All part of life aye! Rocky smooth sad happy accidents even deserted, as well you know the course of life! sometimes. I can't do right. So I wish you typing it properly. I am Tina A VERY HAPPY ANNIVERSARY To You Both. mEMORIES PHOTOS DRINKS SURPRISES.Roses. AND BE TRULY BLESSED. . in all you do to-day don't forget write a poem on it romance ah! Sun out a bit. Bus pass found thank goodness, no car been 2 weeks wait and pay to expensive. So taking small box of chocs shop for thanks, and maybe cuddly toy lady in nursing home, cried as singing finished early, I kind of do actions of "My favourite things" big smile as can't talk. One mentioned take her to bed 3.30pm in day or room shame. ALL THE BEST julie xx

Eine Kleine Nachtmusik

By Silver Spun Sand

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Stutter of her eyelids - but

Yes, it does, fb;-) Pleased

I love this :) Just amazing

Thanks, Beeme;-) Tina xxx

"hope, eclipsing ink-black