Morning After 8

By Steve

Fri, 13 Jul 2012
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"I want you to stop," Rachel said.
"stop what?"
"Stop fucking Julie."
"I can't really have sex. I blackout."
"Stop seeing her."
"I'm sorry."
"Sorry's not enough. Stop it. She called me on the night of your falling down the stairs. She told me of your affair."
"Julie told you?"
"Yes. i was so angry at you.I just meant to hurt you. I pushed you, then..."
"YOU WANTED TO KILL ME?"

"i just wanted you to feel like i felt."
"i don't know. I don't think i can stay with you."
"you don't want to understand anything."

Certificate 15
Story
Relationships
Drama

Comments

Submitted by Sooz006 on
Personally I don't like capitalisation in the middle of a pice, it's not necessary. This is hard-hitting and strong, so much is left to be read between the lines. It's a good piece of writing and I really enjoyed it.

 

Submitted by Steve on
Thank you. Your comments are strongly encouraging.