"gazing" -haiku

By Tretchicovmanicova

Mon, 27 Jun 2022
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the sun kisses the
brow of the building as i
gaze at the new moon.

 

©'t. imaan tretchicovmanicova 
27jun22

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

What a beautiful image you've created in this haiku poem.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Tretchicovmanicova on

Thank you, Jenny, for your kind words about my haiku. Please do continue to enjoy my writings.

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Yes it's very good very descriptive. Just a small remark the new moon is dark you can't see it. But can it be in earthshine? Not sure how to interprit the sun kiss dusk or dawn?

Keep well, your Haiko's are excellent.

Tom Brown

 

Submitted by Tretchicovmanicova on

Mr Tom Brown,
Thank you for your lovely words regarding my poem. 
Kind regards,
`T. Imaan Tretchicovmanicova ~