Changeless change

By valiswaverider

Wed, 16 Nov 2011
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5 comments
 

At the end
When everything is undone
And everything has vanished
Or decayed beyond all recognition
And no one is around who remembers
Is it like it all never happened?
Or does something remain unchanged never passing

The untouchable
The unnameable
The unknowable
Unmoved

A truth without a name
For what truth is it?
What endures in the depth of darkness?

It is an inner peace, but no mere shadow or interior
It is not success or regret
It is not asking or seeking
Simply it is love

Certificate U
Poem
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Comments

Submitted by fatboy74 on
like it :-)

 

Submitted by scratch on
Like it a lot. Bin the last line. Only my subjective opinion. Good read. Scratch.

 

Submitted by Shannan on
The last line is the truth for me - I'd keep it

 

Submitted by Leander42 on
Last line? I'd bin it. It's not needed. Rest of poem = excellent.

 

Submitted by scratch on
Valiswaverider, Sorry to be a pain; one further note if I may? I think that "decade" should be "decayed"? (4 line, stanza 1) Scratch.