Sisters of Snow

By VeraClark
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In cold spells
they collapse to the ground
only to resurrect themselves
once the temperature rises.
During conflict they were
used to de-ice tanks
but eat them and die.
It is the snow which owes
its colour to the snowdrop,
he says, when we tiptoe
past a thousand or more
dingle-dangling whitely
like 16th century earrings.
Pilfered indoors to look
pretty, he says, a fistful
of these will sour the milk
and eggs; at worst, they are
an omen of departure.
He kneels, then, to sever
the droopiest one
at her ankles, gifts her to me,
and when I breathe in
all that almond and honey
I hear a bevy
of witches choking.
She is so crystalline,
blue to the touch.
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One of the reasons I love
One of the reasons I love this time of year.
I like the conflict between the images of beauty and more practical and scientific considerations: the poison, the omens. The poetic and the realistic. The way it suggests a souring between the couple. A deft use of words. The capturing of it all in that final stanza.
'like 16th century earrings' - precise!
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I loved the rapid
I loved the rapid accumulation and discarding of detail as you moved on.
Congratulations. This is our Pick of the Day.
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:) So many images
as you move through personal and wider symbolism
Liked
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womb catchers. Those flowers.
womb catchers. Those flowers. Those sisters. your words.
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