Autumn/Winter Haiku's - 2
By well-wisher
Sat, 18 Nov 2017
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The bright Autumn moon
reflected in the water.
.noom nmutuA thgirb ehT
reflected in the water.
.noom nmutuA thgirb ehT
Rising sun behind
rooftops blanketed in snow;
a child awakens.
rooftops blanketed in snow;
a child awakens.
Sunset, red and round;
the white, bushy beard of snow;
Santa Clause coming.
the white, bushy beard of snow;
Santa Clause coming.
Starry night shining
in through a lattice window.
To eat, hot mince pies.
in through a lattice window.
To eat, hot mince pies.
The white winter moon;
my snowman gazes upwards,
his head in the clouds.
my snowman gazes upwards,
his head in the clouds.
A single gold leaf
on the tree and, in the tree,
a single bird sings.
on the tree and, in the tree,
a single bird sings.
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I like how you write the
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I like how you write the reflection of the moon in the first stanza, very original.
Going from autumn to winter written so magically, and very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
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