The dancers (Changing perspectives)

By well-wisher

Thu, 15 Aug 2013
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He took my hand.

She took my hand.

He twirled me round.

I whirled around.

He danced.

She danced.

We danced together.

She danced.

He danced.

We danced together

and as we danced

we became one;

one soul ascending high above

and as they danced,

that couple below,

up to heaven

I soared.

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Submitted by a102866 on

When you soared to heaven, did you leave her on the ground? I enjoyed your circular verse.

Submitted by hudsonmoon on

Thanks for the dance, well-wisher. What a way to go.

 

Rich

 

Submitted by well-wisher on

You're welcome, Rich but no one dies in the poem. The heaven is a heaven of love; the transcendental bliss of two souls united by love.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by well-wisher on

No, a102866. The dancers become one.  "We became one, one soul ascending high above". It is that "one soul" that ascends. "We" becomes "I".   Glad you enjoyed it.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn