A short rhyme

By well-wisher

Tue, 19 Jun 2012
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Inspiring, like spires and arches of churches,
the little chicks chirping up high on their perches
in branches of beeches and larches and birches
are worth more than all that man’s money can purchase.

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Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Absolutely love the assonance in the third line! The poem flows brilliantly and has a wonderful message, well done ;-) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on
Really lovely WW. Size isn't everything. The rhythm is still rolling in my head!

Parson Thru