The Suitor And The Woman

By well-wisher

Tue, 09 Oct 2012

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A suitor loved a woman
and he wanted her to know
so he gave her songbirds in a cage
but she just let them go.
Then he bought her gold and diamonds
but she gave them to the poor
and said to him, “I love you
but I love my freedom more”.

Comments

A great little piece here

Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on Tue, 2012-10-09 15:57

A great little piece here well-wisher!

Thank you, Maggy. I love

Permalink Submitted by well-wisher on Wed, 2012-10-10 14:34

Thank you, Maggy. I love folk ballads. They're wonderful narrative poems that tell, usually, very gripping and dramatic stories often with strong female characters and, although this poem is quite short, I think its really influenced by my listening to ballads. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Thank you, Blessing. Glad

Permalink Submitted by well-wisher on Wed, 2012-10-10 14:38

Thank you, Blessing. Glad you enjoyed it.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Hello WW, I really enjoyed

Permalink Submitted by Denzella on Thu, 2012-10-11 08:10

Hello WW, I really enjoyed this. Short and sweet but has a point. Moya