Trying A Sedoka (5-7-7, 5-7-7 Japanese love poem form)

By well-wisher

Fri, 08 Dec 2017
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Wait! Don't tear apart
this sedoka; please don't tear
the story of our love a-
 
part or you will tear
my heart apart with sadness;
tear my life apart with loss.
Certificate U
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Submitted by Parson Thru on

It's always great to encounter new forms. In my ignorance, I thought it was going to be a number puzzle. I quite like haiku and, for example, Persian influenced (predictive text forbids the use of hyphens) writing. Thanks for posting this one.

Parson Thru