By the lake

new Beeme What a beautiful descriptive poem the stanza I like Here by the lake,she takes the Water in her hands cupped although to prayer and allows it to slip through her fingertips,like a stream going back to the sea making it's journey. and the last stanza Here by the lake,a song has begun to chant in her ear Hope all is ok. did you mean pray and not prayer sorry not sure.reminds me of Raphaelite book has a picture like this,I have but she is laying in the lake. My long term friend,of years is is hospital. julie.

We obviously both had 'swans on the brain';-) Your poetry goes from strength to strength.Much enjoyed. Tina xx

Very beautiful work. Enough other-worldliness to take it beyond reality into something else, but not overdone. Really liked this. Rob

Hi Beeme, Can't see what you're unsure about, this is a beautiful piece. I really, really like it. Kheldar :--)

'A rush of wind moves the trees, lily pads push to the surface, pink flowers with green tails swim almost unnoticed.' - love this stanza, Beeme! This is a poem full to the brim with rich, colourful imagery. Much enjoyed - well done ;) Magic xxx

Very interesting… Especially the last stanza. It makes me wonder if you’ve been smoking something. Don’t show it to your doctor. I like the lakeside too. Love to go sit and watch the water and the lights. Just sit, and wait, peacefully. Cheers! Nolan

new Beeme and Nolan I to agree,away from housework. And sit and watch nature has to offer,if he won't go I'll go? I think we all could be to-gether. julie xx switch off all mopbiles,hour not I want one,and t.v.concentrate on new poem.subject whatever.Peace! Julie xx

new Beeme please don't think I was rude. re;prayer and pray. If I don't get it quiet here,myself I make loads mistakes.Well friend improved,but as knows quite a few female friend's. I'd happen to know most,I put in get well card,name what about so and so? Unfortunately she read it,phones me out the blue,got my number,shouts head off,what do I mean.What about keep name free ...Well another great friend,he knows and all help him.I Felt sorry she did't know.Ends up she has been everyday.Why I bother I don't know.Always put my foot in it and hear.Another one met on bus,visited with me,asks him all medical details.Ugh! I don't think that's good for any patient.And to phone incase having re-hab;now say only not too many bed.so not Been up week. One says they just go and walk in You can't tell them.He took and included me in all our groups."Midas" everything he touched turned to gold.At moment evrything I do is wrong!Oh!well. Have a good week-end julie xx.

You’ve updated this Beeme? There is good structure and it’s not frivolous. The poem is first class it’s lovely. All so peaceful and so serene. You have real talent. Beauty is in the eyes of the believer &&

New Grandlady Calcabaderl. Great! Picnic-time! Let’s watch one of your favourite nature programs, put the tablecloth on the floor and throw sand over the food. Jokes aside, does sound idyllic. Peace! Nolan

"Here by the lake, she takes the water in her hands cupped although to pray and allows it to slip through her fingertips, like a stream flowing back to the sea." Lovely, pour your heart out &&

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Yes enchanting, luring, "a stream flowing back to the sea". Check out my "thunder and tenacity". Cheers Tom!